Got my eCritique back fra Jason last night and I got some very positive feedback. Only a few minor changes that needs to be done, other than that it’s very close to being finished. Which means that I’ll also be starting on another one of my older shots that I have been looking forward to working on.
The body mechanics are pretty much done, needing only a few minor tweaks here and there. The little arm gesture I added when he says “I’ve got a plan” needs a better arc, and should be held a bit longer. As it is now he drops the arm a bit with out any motivation. The left arm on frame 114 needs a tiny bit of overlap to avoid from hitting the poses so hard.
The lip sync is a bit off during the last half of the shot, and needs to be pulled back about one ore two frames. The lip sync is in general a bit symmetrical and boring, so I should probably look into way of breaking it up in places.
Other than that I’m pretty much close to being done I think. Unless someone has noticed something I haven’t?